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Number 101
August 2005
 

Critique Fest: How to Take Your Work From Good to Wow!

RMC-SCBWI Fall Conference
October 8-9, 2005

by Christine Liu Perkins and Denise Vega

"I know my work is good, but how can I make it better?" "I have a decent draft, but what else does it need?" If these questions occur to you, reserve the weekend of October 8-9 to attend the RMC-SCBWI Fall Conference. You will be treated to a festival of presentations, critiques, and fun aimed at helping you take your writing or illustrating to the next level.

Award-winning author Donna Jo Napoli will offer her insights from publishing nearly 50 books for all ages from preschool to older teens. In her keynote presentation, "Voice: How to Get Heard," she will address various aspects of that elusive yet crucial concept of voice in writing. In her afternoon session, "When and How to Rewrite," she will discuss how to respond to and benefit from critique comments from various sources.

Wonder how manuscripts change from first draft to published book? Claudia Mills, author of over 35 books, will share details of how several of her stories evolved in her session, "Manuscript Makeovers." At the Saturday evening banquet, Mills will inspire us with her "Inch by Inch, Row by Row" tips on how to succeed at writing while holding a demanding job and raising a family.  

Tales of towering piles of manuscripts crowding editors' offices are unfortunately true. But Laura Backes, publisher of Children's Book Insider, has helped many writers rise to the top. Come hear her suggestions for success in her talk, “Writer Beware! How to Avoid Common Mistakes and Get Out of the Slush Pile."

Co-RA Denise Vega will take listeners step by step on her thrilling "Journey of a First (Published) Novel." Learn how this book came to be from idea to finished book. Vega will share her revision process, including editorial letters, copyedited pages and galleys. She will also explain why she believes this was accepted out of her six novels.

 Renowned illustrator Wendell Minor has worked with the likes of Pulitzer prize-winning author David McCullough, who said of him: "Wendell Minor is an exceptionally gifted, almost unimaginably prolific American artist. In the world of publishing there is no one quite like him. Indeed, his value to the whole world of books, to publishers, editors, authors, and to millions of readers who care about books, can hardly be overstated.”

Wendell has illustrated 33 picture books for children, most recently Reaching For the Moon by Astronaut Buzz Aldrin, and Christmas Tree!, his first collaboration with his wife Florence Minor. His paintings are included in the permanent collections of many museums, among them the Smithsonian, the Library of Congress, the Norman Rockwell Museum, The Eric Carle Museum of Picture Book Art, and the New Britain Museum of American Art. Private collectors include Buzz Aldrin, David McCullough, Jean Craighead George, Pat Conroy, Mary Higgins Clark, and Stone Phillips. We are extremely honored to have Wendell coming to share his experiences with us.

On Saturday, Wendell will lead illustrators in "Developing Your Craft," exploring how illustrators can push themselves to go beyond their present ability. Come prepared to be inspired and informed by an illustrator who has worked with many editors, knows the business inside and out, and has written, illustrated, and even pitched ideas to authors and presented them to editors for acquisition.

Baffled by digital printing? Illustrator Danlyn Iantorno will offer guidance in her presentation, "Digital Files: Help! The Printer is Speaking Geek!" A full-time freelance artist and owner of Painted Olive Studios, Iantorno will shed some light on the mysteries behind digital printing, such as why your printed piece doesn't resemble the original artwork. Iantorno has a wealth of information to share so bring your questions!

Outgoing Illustrator Coordinator Lori Kiplinger Pandy will show illustrators how to dismember characters in Photoshop and then reassemble them into the person, place, or thing you actually want for your illustration. Learn how to use this powerful tool to enhance your own illustration.

Three editors--Yolanda LeRoy (Charlesbridge), Cheryl Klein (Arthur A. Levine/Scholastic), and Michele Burke (Knopf)—will help writers and illustrators navigate the waters of getting published. In a panel discussion, they will present their houses' acquisition policies and answer submission questions. In separate sessions, Cheryl Klein and Michele Burke will critique "First Pages" of manuscripts, synopses, query letters, or cover letters.

For illustrators, Yolanda LeRoy will share what criteria she uses to select illustrations and then will critique portfolios. And one lucky illustrator will receive a one-on-one portfolio review with LeRoy on Saturday!

In addition, the editors will be conducting one-on-one critiques of pre-selected manuscripts from our Critique Clinique. The Critique Clinique provides a unique opportunity to receive valuable feedback on your work from either one of the visiting editors or an established author. Submitted manuscripts will be reviewed by a panel of authors who will determine whether a manuscript is ready to receive an editorial critique. Those selected will be sent to one of the editors based on the age level and genre of the piece. Manuscripts not selected will be critiqued by an author who will provide valuable feedback to make the piece stronger. Authors who receive an author critique will pick it up on Saturday. The deadline for the Clinique was July 15 so if you were unable to participate this year, look for other opportunities to get feedback on your work at future events.

We will also be offering a special door prize for one lucky author—an extremely detailed, written critique from Editorial Consultant, Michael Wilde. After the winner is announced, arrangements will be made for the winner to submit a full picture book manuscript or up to 75 pages of a novel to Wilde in New York. Wilde has more than 20 years of experience working with leading publishers in the industry in both fiction (general, literary, and children's) and nonfiction adult trade. "Michael Wilde is the kind of editor writers dream about. He has a deeply sympathetic ear for character and voice, while remaining meticulous in grammar and story logic. On top of all this, his respectful and enthusiastic sensibility make him a pleasure to work with."  ~ Curtis Gillespie, journalist and author of Playing Through (Crown, 2004).

On Sunday, three different workshops will be offered. For pre-published writers, Donna Jo Napoli will lead a workshop, "Three Exercises That Help You Grab and Hold onto Your Reader," where participants will write, share, and learn together. Published writers of children's literature will learn ways to hone their craft in the Professional Forum workshop with editor talks by Michele Burke on "The Narrative Voice," by Cheryl Klein on "The Rules of Engagement: How to Get (and Keep!) a Reader Involved in Your Novel," and "Nonfiction is Not for Nerds!" by Yolanda LeRoy. Illustrators will be treated to a workshop with Wendell Minor entitled "Using Your Own Compass," in which participants will explore how to follow their own instincts instead of following trends.

The Fall Conference "Critique Fest" promises to provide a wealth of opportunities for everyone to learn how to improve their writing and illustrating, with an amazing array of speakers. We hope you can join us for this wonderful and unique opportunity.